Greatest is LOVE!

Ok I need some help. I took a prompt for drapery_snarco, and I have been trying to write it and it is just not working for me. I need to get the rating up and I have 3 paragraphs that I really like in the whole thing. Does any on want to read what I have a help me out? Please!!!

I just wrote a cross gen fic and I am looking for someone to beta it. It is just under 2000 words. It is Draco and Al. I am not really sure how the whole bata thing works. I have never used one before, but I would really like someone to look over it before I post it.

edit-I have found one. The lovely angela_snape.